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Message de aldareis posté le 23-09-2007 à 20:21:46 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, j'aurais besoin d'avoir votre avis sur un oral que je dois présenter.
Il y a un certain mot ou expression que j'ai traduit et j'aimerais simplifier au maximum cet oral. Merci d'avance
My Self :
My name is Christophe.
I am twenty one years old.
I live in the beautiful town: xxx.
My apartment located near to the center of formation.
I am studying for a BTS in computer management in alternation.
Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday, I work to firm. Thursday and Friday, I studies center of formation.
My activities :
I play tennis and table tennis once a week.
I practice roller from time to time.
I like listening music and I playing guitar.
I enjoy surfing in Internet to like at my emails, forums and to discuss my friends.
I like travelling and I already left Barcelona in Spain with a tourist aim and Casablanca in Morocco for installing computer in orphanage and library
The Company :
I work to the firm at xxx Climatisation in xxx sur Sarthe.
xxx Climatisation belongs branch VCC (Thermique Habitacle) A other site xxx located at xxx in Czech republic.
There is other branch such as xxx which doing Lighting indication.
Valeo work with several constructor cars such like BMW, Fiat, Ford, Honda, Porsche, Toyota…
Registered office located xxx in Paris
xxx xxx rise seventy one thousand person and sales turnover reached ten milliards euros.
My future :
I would like become networker administrator. After BTS computer management, I think which I make license at school ENI in xxx during one year. After that, I go active life.
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Modifié par bridg le 23-09-2007 20:34
Pas de noms sur le site. Merci
Message de aldareis posté le 23-09-2007 à 20:21:46 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, j'aurais besoin d'avoir votre avis sur un oral que je dois présenter.
Il y a un certain mot ou expression que j'ai traduit et j'aimerais simplifier au maximum cet oral. Merci d'avance
My Self :
My name is Christophe.
I am twenty one years old.
I live in the beautiful town: xxx.
My apartment located near to the center of formation.
I am studying for a BTS in computer management in alternation.
Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday, I work to firm. Thursday and Friday, I studies center of formation.
My activities :
I play tennis and table tennis once a week.
I practice roller from time to time.
I like listening music and I playing guitar.
I enjoy surfing in Internet to like at my emails, forums and to discuss my friends.
I like travelling and I already left Barcelona in Spain with a tourist aim and Casablanca in Morocco for installing computer in orphanage and library
The Company :
I work to the firm at xxx Climatisation in xxx sur Sarthe.
xxx Climatisation belongs branch VCC (Thermique Habitacle) A other site xxx located at xxx in Czech republic.
There is other branch such as xxx which doing Lighting indication.
Valeo work with several constructor cars such like BMW, Fiat, Ford, Honda, Porsche, Toyota…
Registered office located xxx in Paris
xxx xxx rise seventy one thousand person and sales turnover reached ten milliards euros.
My future :
I would like become networker administrator. After BTS computer management, I think which I make license at school ENI in xxx during one year. After that, I go active life.
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Modifié par bridg le 23-09-2007 20:34
Pas de noms sur le site. Merci
Réponse: Besoin avis sur texte présentation de jean31, postée le 24-09-2007 à 12:09:44 (S | E)
Bonjour,
A toutes fins utiles, tu trouveras, balisées en rouge, les choses à revoir et corriger.
My Self :
My name is Christophe.
I am twenty one years old.
I live in the beautiful town of xxx.
My apartment -- located near to the center of formation.
I am studying for a BTS in computer management in alternation.
Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday, I work to firm. Thursday and Friday, I studies -- -- center of formation.
My activities :
I play tennis and table tennis once a week.
I practice roller------- from time to time.
I like listening -- music and I playing -- guitar.
I enjoy surfing in-- Internet to like at my emails, forums and to discuss -- my friends.
I like travelling and I already left Barcelona in Spain with a tourist aim and Casablanca in Morocco for installing computer- in -- orphanage and -- library
The Company :
I work to the firm at xxx Climatisation in xxx sur Sarthe.
xxx Climatisation belongs -- branch VCC (Thermique Habitacle) A other site xxx -- located at xxx in -- Czech republic.
There is other branch such as xxx which doing Lighting indication.
Valeo work with several constructor cars such like BMW, Fiat, Ford, Honda, Porsche, Toyota…
Registered office -- located xxx in Paris
xxx xxx rise seventy one thousand person- and sales turnover reached ten milliards euros.
My future :
I would like -- become -- networker administrator. After BTS computer management, I think which I make license at school ENI in xxx during one year. After that, I go active life.
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Modifié par jean31 le 24-09-2007 12:10
