Let's suggest 114- Taking it easy 60

Let's suggest 114- Taking it easy 60
Message de here4u posté le 01-08-2026 à 22:56:11 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,

Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...
Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m'avaient dit être gênés d'exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l'impression - souvent fausse - de les exprimer maladroitement ). Dautre part, vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici vos sujets "de réflexion"!

1) What does the word 'HOLIDAY' mean to you?

2) Do you approve of young people driving as young as 16?

3) Tell us about your latest dream (or nightmare)?

Répondez à 1 ou 2 sujet(s) au choix en mp en notant bien les références - développez celui (ceux) que vous voulez, jusqu'à atteindre en tout un maximum d'environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d'abord pendant deux jours, sans donner 'votre solution') puis en vert. Une fois le premier texte 'corrigé' au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé le mardi 28 juillet 2026 ! with THE FORCE, GO FOR IT!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 114- Taking it easy 60 de here4u, postée le 02-08-2026 à 16:02:11 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here is our first ANSWER.

1) What does the word 'HOLIDAY' mean to you?please indicate possible mistakes, and underline what looks clumsy to you...


For me, HOLIDAY means packing things and packing same dirty things to go back to home. Meeting new people by hazard, knowing that you maynot keep be in contact in a week or two pushes us to superficiality. I hate it. Holiday means asking you what your are going to do next, and answer yes to the most stupid ideas like lying under the sun at a crowded beach and do nothing, just wait for your skin to become brown (or red). And one of the groups of friends suggests you to go and have a ride on a jetski.You know that he knows anything about jetski (no license needed) and find you enbarassed because the police stops you and fined you.The evening, you may drink what you never drink and danse and drik again - it's so hot- and find that your friends have took a lot of money to you. You stupid guy! That's why you hate holiday.

for your help.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 114- Taking it easy 60 de gerold, postée le 02-08-2026 à 23:10:32 (S | E)
hello!

1) What does the word 'HOLIDAY' mean to you?please indicate possible mistakes, and underline what looks clumsy to you...

A rather pessimistic point of view

For me, xx HOLIDAY means packing things and packing xx same dirty things to go back to home. connection needed Meeting new people by hazard, knowing that you maynot keep be in contact in a week or two pushes us to superficiality. I hate it. Holiday means asking you what your are going to do next, and answer yes to the most stupid ideas like lying under the sun at a crowded beach and do nothing, just wait for your skin to become brown (or red). And one of the groups of friends suggests you to go and have a ride on a jetski.You know that he knows anything about jetski (no license needed) and find you enbarassed because the police stops you and fined you.xx The evening, you may drink what you never drink and danse and drik again - it's so hot- and find that your friends have took a lot of money to you. You stupid guy! That's why you hate holiday.

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Modifié par gerold le 04-08-2026 18:08

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Réponse : Let's suggest 114- Taking it easy 60 de gerold, postée le 05-08-2026 à 22:34:55 (S | E)
hello!

1) What does the word 'HOLIDAY' mean to you?please indicate possible mistakes, and underline what looks clumsy to you...

A rather pessimistic point of view

For me, the word HOLIDAY means packing things and packing the same dirty things to go back to home* and meeting new people by chance (hazard=danger). Moreover**, knowing that you may not keep be in contacted in a week or two pushes/leads us you to superficiality/futility. I hate it. Holiday means asking yourself/wondering what your you are going to do next, and answering yes to the most stupid ideas like lying under the sun at a crowded beach and do nothing, just wait for your skin to become brown (or red). And one of the groups of your friends suggests you to that you (should) go and have a ride on a Jet Ski. You know think that he knows something about Jet Ski (no license needed) and find yourself enbarrassed because the police stops you and fines you (same tense). In the evening, you may drink what you never drink and dance and drink again - it's so hot- and find that your friends have took a lot of money to from you. You stupid guy! That's why you hate holiday.

* "The same dirty things" is weird, they were not dirty at the beginning. Suggestion : ... and bringing these things back home dirty ...
** I split the sentence to avoid suggesting that meeting new people by chance leads to futility.

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Modifié par gerold le 06-08-2026 13:13

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Réponse : Let's suggest 114- Taking it easy 60 de here4u, postée le 07-08-2026 à 22:11:45 (S | E)
Hello dears,

1) What does the word 'HOLIDAY' mean to you? my indications.
gerold wrote: A rather pessimistic point of view.

For me, the word HOLIDAY means packing things and packing the same dirty things to go back to home* ¤ and meeting new people by chance (hazard=danger). Moreover**, knowing that you may not keep be in contacted in a week or two pushes/leads us you to superficiality/futility. I hate it. Holiday means asking yourself/wondering what your you are going to do next, and answering 'yes' to the most stupid ideas like lying under the sun at a crowded beach and do nothing, just wait for your skin to become brown (or red). And one of the groups of your 'friends' suggests you to that you (should) go and have a ride on a Jet Ski. You know think that he knows something about Jet Skis (no license needed) and find yourself e(nbarrassed because the police stops you and fines you (same tense). In the evening, you may drink what you never drink and dance and drink again - it's so hot- and find that your friends have took a lot of money to from you. You stupid guy! That's why you hate holiday.

¤: I totally approve of gerold's remark and suggestion.
Pessimistic (or realistic ) point of view... Very good suggestions of corrections.

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