Let's suggest 115/ Taking it easy 61

Let's suggest 115/ Taking it easy 61
Message de here4u posté le 14-08-2026 à 22:52:07 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,

Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...
Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m'avaient dit être gênés d'exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l'impression - souvent fausse - de les exprimer maladroitement ). Dautre part, vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici vos sujets "de réflexion"!

1) Do you read during your holidays? If you do, what sort of books?

2) "Too little, too late!" What does the expression bring to your mind?

3) Tell us about your latest dream (or nightmare)?


Répondez à 1 ou 2 sujet(s) au choix en mp en notant bien les références - développez celui (ceux) que vous voulez, jusqu'à atteindre en tout un maximum d'environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d'abord pendant deux jours, sans donner 'votre solution') puis en vert. Une fois le premier texte 'corrigé' au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé le vendredi 28 août 2026 ! with THE FORCE, GO FOR IT!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 115/ Taking it easy 61 de here4u, postée le 15-08-2026 à 16:05:06 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here is our first ANSWER. Thanks for helping its author.


ANSWER A: topic 3: Please, indicate possible mistakes, and underline what you think is clumsy.

My last dream was an awful nightmare. It was a winter evening when I came home from work; at that time of the year, it was already dark. I had just missed the bus that was leaving when I arrived... since it only passed every half hour. I decided to walk. Going through the park, the path was shorter. I moved quietly when I heard a quick step behind me. Although not very reassured, I didn't want to show my fear by hastening my step, nor did I dare turn around. In an instant, I felt arms gripping me behind, a body rubbing against me. I shouted at myself but no sound came out of my mouth. So I bit the attacker's arm hard. At that moment, my husband shouted "OUCH"
What is happening to you? I woke up screaming aloud, let me go, let me go. But you bit me! said my husband, showing me his bloody arm.
Oh my love, I'm sorry, it was a nightmare.
In my sleep, I had actually grabbed and bitten my partner's arm. I still shiver as I tell it.

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 115/ Taking it easy 61 de gerold, postée le 15-08-2026 à 21:25:24 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: topic 3: Please, indicate possible mistakes, and underline what you think is clumsy.

an interesting text!

My last dream was an awful nightmare. It was a winter evening when I came xx (add something) home from work; at that time of the year, it was already dark. I had just missed the bus that was leaving when I arrived... since (is this logical?) it only passed every half hour. I decided to walk. Going through the park, the path was shorter. I moved quietly when I heard a quick step behind me. Although not very reassured, I didn't want to show my fear by hastening my step, nor did I dare turn around. In an instant, I felt arms gripping me xx behind, a body rubbing against me. I shouted at myself but no sound came out of my mouth (contradiction?) . So I bit the attacker's arm hard. At that moment, my husband shouted "OUCH"
What is happening to you? I woke up screaming aloud, let me go, let me go. But you bit me! said my husband (punctuation), showing me his bloody arm.
Oh my love, I'm sorry, it was a nightmare.
In my sleep, I had actually grabbed and bitten my partner's arm. I still shiver as I tell it.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 115/ Taking it easy 61 de magie8, postée le 17-08-2026 à 12:07:22 (S | E)
hello correction Merci Gerold pour les indications


ANSWER A: topic 3:



My last dream was an awful nightmare. It was a winter evening when I came (back) home from work; at that time of the year, it was already dark. I had just missed the bus that was leaving when I arrived...( As the bus only (ran every half (an hour,( instead waiting for, I decided to walk.( Cut through the park, the path was shorter. I moved quietly when I heard a quick step behind me. Although not very reassured, I didn't want to show my fear by hastening my step, nor did I dare turn around. In an instant, I felt arms gripping me (by behind, a body rubbing against me. I( wanted to scream but no sound came out of my mouth.(Then I bit the attacker's arm hard. At that moment, my husband shouted "OUCH"
What is happening to you? I woke up screaming aloud, let me go, let me go. But you bit me! said my husband: showing me his bloody arm.
Oh my love, I'm sorry, it was a nightmare.
In my sleep, I had actually grabbed and bitten my partner's arm. I still shiver as I tell it.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 115/ Taking it easy 61 de here4u, postée le 17-08-2026 à 14:15:48 (S | E)
Hello dears,

ANSWER A: topic 3: my indications:


My last dream was an awful nightmare. It was a winter evening when I came (back) home from work; at that time of the year, it was already dark. I had just missed the bus that was leaving when I arrived...( As the bus only (ran every half (an hour,( instead waiting for, I decided to walk.( Cut through the park, the path was shorter. I moved quietly when I heard a quick step behind me. Although not very reassured, I didn't want to show my fear by hastening my step, nor did I dare xx turn around. In an instant, I felt arms gripping me (by behind, a body rubbing against me. I( wanted to scream but no sound came out of my mouth.(Then I bit the attacker's arm hard. At that moment, my husband shouted "OUCH"
What is happening to you? I woke up screaming aloud, let me go, let me go. But you bit me! said my husband: showing me his bloody arm.
Oh my love, I'm sorry, it was a nightmare.
In my sleep, I had actually grabbed and bitten my partner's arm. I still shiver as I tell it.

Il serait bien de mettre des guillemets pour le discours direct rapporté de la fin du texte. Bon texte, intéressant.

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