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Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
Tout ce qui a un rapport avec l'apprentissage de l'anglais: grammaire, orthographe, aides aux devoirs, phrases etc.
Typical life /correction
Message de fashion_azn posté le 20-03-2007 à 15:54:28 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous vérifier si mon texte est bonsvp s'il vous plaît ? Merci.
This is a typical life of American context. As we can see there are young people who are in the dinner so we can infer that it takes place in USA. We can see that we are in the 80’s because of their clothes and their hairstyles.
We can see that the atmosphere is very festive, people seem joyful and in a fine mood, they are like a giant family who laugh and have fun a lot. Just as the waiter
We can deduce that they are together either because they are friends or they are in the dinner to have a drink.
So we see that this ad promote the brand Coca-Cola “coke”. The aim of this ad is to say that this drink is very great for a cold drink, this permit refreshment, maybe this ad is for summer because it’s very hot.
So we can deduce that if people drink Coca-Cola, they are happy, this cheers people up.
This drink purchase everywhere and in anything condition either in a soda fountain or in a counter.
American are very cool, they always smile, they like have a good time.
I think that it’s a good advertising because for me too this drink permit a real refreshment when you are tired or when it’s very hot, we can drink Coca-Cola in whatever occasion and anywhere. We feel good after drink this.
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Modifié par bridg le 20-03-2007 16:04
Titre distinctif.
Message de fashion_azn posté le 20-03-2007 à 15:54:28 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous vérifier si mon texte est bon
This is a typical life of American context. As we can see there are young people who are in the dinner so we can infer that it takes place in USA. We can see that we are in the 80’s because of their clothes and their hairstyles.
We can see that the atmosphere is very festive, people seem joyful and in a fine mood, they are like a giant family who laugh and have fun a lot. Just as the waiter
We can deduce that they are together either because they are friends or they are in the dinner to have a drink.
So we see that this ad promote the brand Coca-Cola “coke”. The aim of this ad is to say that this drink is very great for a cold drink, this permit refreshment, maybe this ad is for summer because it’s very hot.
So we can deduce that if people drink Coca-Cola, they are happy, this cheers people up.
This drink purchase everywhere and in anything condition either in a soda fountain or in a counter.
American are very cool, they always smile, they like have a good time.
I think that it’s a good advertising because for me too this drink permit a real refreshment when you are tired or when it’s very hot, we can drink Coca-Cola in whatever occasion and anywhere. We feel good after drink this.
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Modifié par bridg le 20-03-2007 16:04
Titre distinctif.
