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Message de lex93 posté le 16-10-2007 à 12:54:43 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour pour demain (Mercredi) j'ai une rédaction à faire, là voilà :
- Halo, Helen.
- Where are you then?
- I am at the office, there is a power outage, but why you talk funny?
- I talk funny because I am Frantic, but I am confident that you would be alive.
- Why are you reassured that I am alive, what happens?
- Two planes have slowed in the twin towers, and the sixtieth floor of the North tower, not far from your desk.
- What? What happens?
- Two planes have slowed in the towers, the towers are on fire, people jumping on the upper floors, and it is horrible.
- Oh! There must be a lot of injuries; I must to help.
- Certainly not, on television, they say that the explosion killed planes all persons at the level of its floors.
- Maybe there are survivors, I have to help the firefighter.
- No, I worry there will begs as p, think of the children and to me, if something happen it could not rely.
But I must help the firefighters, at least if I die I will always like.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les fautes de conjugaison grammaire, ...
Merci
Message de lex93 posté le 16-10-2007 à 12:54:43 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour pour demain (Mercredi) j'ai une rédaction à faire, là voilà :
- Halo, Helen.
- Where are you then?
- I am at the office, there is a power outage, but why you talk funny?
- I talk funny because I am Frantic, but I am confident that you would be alive.
- Why are you reassured that I am alive, what happens?
- Two planes have slowed in the twin towers, and the sixtieth floor of the North tower, not far from your desk.
- What? What happens?
- Two planes have slowed in the towers, the towers are on fire, people jumping on the upper floors, and it is horrible.
- Oh! There must be a lot of injuries; I must to help.
- Certainly not, on television, they say that the explosion killed planes all persons at the level of its floors.
- Maybe there are survivors, I have to help the firefighter.
- No, I worry there will begs as p, think of the children and to me, if something happen it could not rely.
But I must help the firefighters, at least if I die I will always like.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les fautes de conjugaison grammaire, ...
Merci
Réponse: Aide correction texte Anglais de jean31, postée le 16-10-2007 à 19:08:43 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
A ta place, j'aurais attendu davantage encore, peut-être même jusqu'à minuit...
Désolé d'être aussi cru, mais ton texte a été écrit n'importe comment.
Toutefois, voici quelques petites remarques qui te seront utiles, je l'espère.
- Hello
- power cut
- why + auxiliaire + pronom sujet + BV
- que se passe-t-il = what's going on?
- que vient faire le verbe slow ici ?
- desk = bureau, le meuble <=> office = bureau, la pièce/le lieu de travail
- must = modal => + BV
- etc.
