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General Custer (à corriger)
Message de sophie29 posté le 27-01-2008 à 18:07:56 (S | E | F)
Salut tout le monde!! Happy new year!!
voilà j'avais a faire une petite biographie sur le Général Custeur ca peut toujours servir 
(par contre si il y a des fautes, faites le moi savoir merci !!!)
GENERAL CUSTER
He was born un 1839 and he died in 1876. He was an american Civil War General, one of the most famous and controversial figures in United States Military History.
He was an "Indian Fighter".Wiht the 7th Cavalry, he led several battles against cheyenne's Indians.
But, in 1876, He lost the battle of Litlle Bighorn against the Cheyennes and the Sioux : two hundred white soldiers died. Forteen years later, this big battle led to the massacre Sioux in Wounded Knee.
Message de sophie29 posté le 27-01-2008 à 18:07:56 (S | E | F)
Salut tout le monde!! Happy new year!!
voilà j'avais a faire une petite biographie sur le Général Custeur ca peut toujours servir (par contre si il y a des fautes, faites le moi savoir merci !!!)GENERAL CUSTER
He was born un 1839 and he died in 1876. He was an american Civil War General, one of the most famous and controversial figures in United States Military History.
He was an "Indian Fighter".Wiht the 7th Cavalry, he led several battles against cheyenne's Indians.
But, in 1876, He lost the battle of Litlle Bighorn against the Cheyennes and the Sioux : two hundred white soldiers died. Forteen years later, this big battle led to the massacre Sioux in Wounded Knee.
Réponse: General Custer (à corriger) de hpesoj, postée le 27-01-2008 à 21:13:17 (S | E)
Il y a quelques fautes grammaticales, mais principalement il y a des fautes de capitalisation. J'ai surligné les erreurs.
He was born un 1839 and he died in 1876. He was an american Civil War General, one of the most famous and controversial figures in United States Military History.
He was an "Indian Fighter".Wiht the 7th Cavalry, he led several battles against cheyenne's Indians.
But, in 1876, He lost the battle of Litlle Bighorn against the Cheyennes and the Sioux : two hundred white soldiers died. Forteen years later, this big battle led to the massacre Sioux in Wounded Knee.
Il vaut mieux dire "the Cheyenne Indians".
Joe
Réponse: General Custer (à corriger) de sophie29, postée le 27-01-2008 à 22:42:31 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup j'ai donc corrigé les erreurs.
He was born in 1839 and he died in 1876. He was an american Civil War General, one of the most famous and controversial figures in United States military history.
He was an "Indian Fighter".With the 7th Cavalry, he led several battles against the Cheyenne Indians.
But, in 1876, He lost the battle of Litle Bighorn against the Cheyennes and the Sioux : two hundred white soldiers died. Forteen years later, this big battle led to the Sioux's massacre in Wounded Knee.
