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Besoin d'aide/Ugolin et ses fils
Message de goupil59 posté le 09-11-2008 à 23:25:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai besoin que quelqu'un corrige mon anglais qui n'est pas des meilleurs...
merci de prendre letps temps de me lire!
Ugolin et ses fils- Carpeaux
This sculpture was realized between 1857 and 1861 by Jean-Baptiste Carpeaux. This masterpiece is in plaster, measures 1.48m x 1.94m x 1.19m, and is located at the museum of valenciennes.
It’s a free-standing sculpture, composed by four characters: Ugolin Della Guerardesca, his two sons, and his two grandsons. The subject is inspired by The Divine Comedy by Dante Alighieri, it inspired many romantic or symbolist artists, included Delacroix and Rodin.
Ugolin Della Guerardesca, first Chief Magistrate of Pisa, is accused of treason, because he wanted to take the power. It is the archbishop Ubaldini who imprisoned him with his children into a tower, where is condemned to starve having consumed the flesh of its offspring.
Ugolin in the center, sits on a drapery put on a rock. An elbow on the knees and the other one on the back of one of his sons. His two hands are at the level of the face, the one supporting him. His sons are distributed around him, the one standing in its left, folded in two and seeming to hold him by the waist . Other one almost lengthened holding both calfs of ugolin between the arms, the face turned to him. Both grandsons are also around ugolin but in attitudes opposite of that of their father: the one to the left, sleeps between the legs of the standing son; other one, to the right, also seems to the border of the sleep, rested against ugolin. The artist uses all the surface of the base. The children follow the edge of the base and bound it by their body.
The general composition takes the shape of a perfect pyramid.
The musculature and the anatomy of the characters are strongly highlighted, the classic education of the artist is very present. it was inspired by masters of the Renaissance and by the antiquity, the returning of the modelling reminds the slaves of Michel angel. Hairstyles are of Roman inspiration.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-11-2008 08:12
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Message de goupil59 posté le 09-11-2008 à 23:25:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai besoin que quelqu'un corrige mon anglais qui n'est pas des meilleurs...
merci de prendre le
Ugolin et ses fils- Carpeaux
This sculpture was realized between 1857 and 1861 by Jean-Baptiste Carpeaux. This masterpiece is in plaster, measures 1.48m x 1.94m x 1.19m, and is located at the museum of valenciennes.
It’s a free-standing sculpture, composed by four characters: Ugolin Della Guerardesca, his two sons, and his two grandsons. The subject is inspired by The Divine Comedy by Dante Alighieri, it inspired many romantic or symbolist artists, included Delacroix and Rodin.
Ugolin Della Guerardesca, first Chief Magistrate of Pisa, is accused of treason, because he wanted to take the power. It is the archbishop Ubaldini who imprisoned him with his children into a tower, where is condemned to starve having consumed the flesh of its offspring.
Ugolin in the center, sits on a drapery put on a rock. An elbow on the knees and the other one on the back of one of his sons. His two hands are at the level of the face, the one supporting him. His sons are distributed around him, the one standing in its left, folded in two and seeming to hold him by the waist . Other one almost lengthened holding both calfs of ugolin between the arms, the face turned to him. Both grandsons are also around ugolin but in attitudes opposite of that of their father: the one to the left, sleeps between the legs of the standing son; other one, to the right, also seems to the border of the sleep, rested against ugolin. The artist uses all the surface of the base. The children follow the edge of the base and bound it by their body.
The general composition takes the shape of a perfect pyramid.
The musculature and the anatomy of the characters are strongly highlighted, the classic education of the artist is very present. it was inspired by masters of the Renaissance and by the antiquity, the returning of the modelling reminds the slaves of Michel angel. Hairstyles are of Roman inspiration.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-11-2008 08:12
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Réponse: Besoin d'aide/Ugolin et ses fils de brettdallen, postée le 09-11-2008 à 23:54:51 (S | E)
Bonsoir Goupil,
Le début de la correction est sur votre messagerie!
Je ne corrige que quelques mots car je n'ai pas le texte devant les yeux!
-"it inspired"="which inspired"
-"included"="including"
-"is accused"="was accused"(pense que ce dont tu parles est révolu!)
-"it is the archbishop..."="it was.."
-"where he is condemned"="where he was"
-"having consumed"="because he had consumed"
En espérant que cela inspirera d'autres membres à t'aider..
