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Message de eloadu57 posté le 07-01-2009 à 15:03:39 (S | E | F)
Hello!!
Avec quelques imformations, j'ai du faire le dialogue qui va suivre.
J'aimerais savoir si vous pouviez me le corriger s'il vous plaît:
Journalist 1: Good morning, I’m a Glorious journalist.
Journalist2: good morning, I am a Moon journalist.
Investigator: hello.
Journalist1: How a president Marco of Santa Nevada was kidnapped?
Journalist2: When?
Investigator: A Marco of Santa Nevada’s president was kidnapped last night, while he was sleeping …
Journalist2: who is the kidnapper?
Journalist1: Why the president was kidnapped?
Investigator: The name of the suspect is a secret, I can't say it. I don’t know why he was kidnapped… I suppose just for money …
Journalist2 : Thus, the kidnapper was found?
Investigator: Yes, he was.
Journalist2: Where was the victim?
Investigator: The president was found in Suilding’s farm.
Journalist2 : How was the president found?
Investigator : the policeman saw a strange car in a near palace.
Journalist1: Was the victim wounded?
Investigator: Yes, currently he’s in hospital…
Journalist2: Are the wounds serious?
Investigator: No, no …
Message de eloadu57 posté le 07-01-2009 à 15:03:39 (S | E | F)
Hello!!
Avec quelques imformations, j'ai du faire le dialogue qui va suivre.
J'aimerais savoir si vous pouviez me le corriger s'il vous plaît:
Journalist 1: Good morning, I’m a Glorious journalist.
Journalist2: good morning, I am a Moon journalist.
Investigator: hello.
Journalist1: How a president Marco of Santa Nevada was kidnapped?
Journalist2: When?
Investigator: A Marco of Santa Nevada’s president was kidnapped last night, while he was sleeping …
Journalist2: who is the kidnapper?
Journalist1: Why the president was kidnapped?
Investigator: The name of the suspect is a secret, I can't say it. I don’t know why he was kidnapped… I suppose just for money …
Journalist2 : Thus, the kidnapper was found?
Investigator: Yes, he was.
Journalist2: Where was the victim?
Investigator: The president was found in Suilding’s farm.
Journalist2 : How was the president found?
Investigator : the policeman saw a strange car in a near palace.
Journalist1: Was the victim wounded?
Investigator: Yes, currently he’s in hospital…
Journalist2: Are the wounds serious?
Investigator: No, no …
Réponse: Dialogue à corriger de jean31, postée le 07-01-2009 à 18:03:56 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Qu'elle soit ouverte ou fermée, une question doit toujours comporter ces élément obligatoires :
- (Mot interrogatif)+ auxiliaire + sujet + base verbale ou V-en.
Rectifie tes phrases partout où ce n'est pas le cas et reviens les faire vérifier.
Réponse: Dialogue à corriger de eloadu57, postée le 07-01-2009 à 20:28:29 (S | E)
Il me semble avoir corrigé toutes les questions, est-ce mieux comme cela??
merci déjà pour votre réponse !
Journalist 1: Good morning, I’m a Glorious journalist.
Journalist2: good morning, I am a Moon journalist.
Investigator: hello.
Journalist1: How was a president Marco of Santa Nevada kidnapped?
Journalist2: When?
Investigator: A Marco of Santa Nevada’s president was kidnapped last night, while he was sleeping …
Journalist2: who is the kidnapper?
Journalist1: Why was the president kidnapped?
Investigator: The name of the suspect is a secret, I can't say it. I don’t know why he was kidnapped… I suppose just for money …
Journalist2 : Thus, Was the kidnapper found?
Investigator: Yes, he was.
Journalist2: Where was the victim?
Investigator: The president was found in Suilding’s farm.
Journalist2 : How was the president found?
Investigator : the policeman saw a strange car in a near palace.
Journalist1: Was the victim wounded?
Investigator: Yes, currently he’s in hospital…
Journalist2: Are the wounds serious?
Investigator: No, no …
Et le vocabulaire est-il juste? parce que j'ai pas mal cherche dans le dico j'ai pu me trompé...
merci !
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Modifié par eloadu57 le 07-01-2009 20:50
