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Message de alynia posté le 19-01-2009 à 19:10:30 (S | E | F)
Cezanne
Voila un essai d'expression écrite .
Pouriez vous me corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait.
Last week i went to Paris with my family.
I visited Orsay museum. There we met my aunt who had already been waiting for us.
The museum building was originally a railway station .
I saw many paintings sculpture furniture and photography .
This museum is really famous for it's paintings collection of impressionist such as Manet, Monet, Degas, Renoir, and Cezanne…
My favourite painter is Degas because he drew lots of ballet dancer and it's my passion.
An fortunately we arrive a bit late so we couldn't spend a lot of time.
The evening we went to the theatre to see a play where my cousin had worked.
We watched “L'affaire de la rue Lourcine” by Labiche.
It's a detective comedy.
It's about two men who thing to have kill a woman.
We had a good time.
Finally at two o'clock we drove back to Le Mans.
Merci
Message de alynia posté le 19-01-2009 à 19:10:30 (S | E | F)
Cezanne
Voila un essai d'expression écrite .
Pouriez vous me corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait.
Last week i went to Paris with my family.
I visited Orsay museum. There we met my aunt who had already been waiting for us.
The museum building was originally a railway station .
I saw many paintings sculpture furniture and photography .
This museum is really famous for it's paintings collection of impressionist such as Manet, Monet, Degas, Renoir, and Cezanne…
My favourite painter is Degas because he drew lots of ballet dancer and it's my passion.
An fortunately we arrive a bit late so we couldn't spend a lot of time.
The evening we went to the theatre to see a play where my cousin had worked.
We watched “L'affaire de la rue Lourcine” by Labiche.
It's a detective comedy.
It's about two men who thing to have kill a woman.
We had a good time.
Finally at two o'clock we drove back to Le Mans.
Merci
Réponse: Expression écrite Paris de jean31, postée le 20-01-2009 à 10:07:40 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- Corriger ce qui est en rouge.
- Corriger l'omission signalée par
.- Mes propres corrections sont en vert.
Reviens faire vérifier tout ça quand tu auras apporté toutes les corrections.
Bon travail et à te lire.
Last week i went to Paris with my family.
I visited
Orsay museum. There we met my aunt who had already been waiting for us.The museum building was originally a railway station.
I saw many paintings, sculpture
, pieces of furniture and photography.This museum is really famous for it's paintings collection of impressionist
such as Manet, Monet, Degas, Renoir and Cezanne…My favourite painter is Degas because he drew lots of ballet dancer
and it's my passion.An fortunately we arrive a bit late so we couldn't spend a lot of time.
The evening, we went to the theatre to see a play where my cousin had worked.We watched “L'affaire de la rue Lourcine” by Labiche.
It's a detective comedy.
It's about two men who thing they have killed a woman.
We had a good time.
Finally at two o'clock we drove back to Le Mans.
