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Message de aymeu posté le 28-03-2009 à 18:17:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Afin d'aider un ami qui a un devoir à faire sur les nouvelles technologies (classe de 2nde) : Télé, consoles de jeux, ordinateur,... pourriez-vous lui apporter votre soutien pour son devoir que je vous laisse ci-dessous.
Merci beaucoup
P.S. : Il a choisi de présenter la playstation 3
Cordialement
I choose to present you the PS3 because lot of teens use it, i'm going to describe it in my presentation. It went out in EUROPE on 23rd March 2007, it was invented by Company SONY, one of the biggest creator of new technologies. It succeeds the PS2, it is a concurrent of WII created by nintendo and XBOX360 by Microsoft. It is a games console 7th generation, because is not used only to play video games. In fact, we can use it to watch DVD, listen music, surf oon web, and communicate with people in all the world. It looks like a computer with her hard disk, DVD drive, and a image quality in HD. Merci à vous
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-03-2009 18:25
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Message de aymeu posté le 28-03-2009 à 18:17:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Afin d'aider un ami qui a un devoir à faire sur les nouvelles technologies (classe de 2nde) : Télé, consoles de jeux, ordinateur,... pourriez-vous lui apporter votre soutien pour son devoir que je vous laisse ci-dessous.
Merci beaucoup
P.S. : Il a choisi de présenter la playstation 3
Cordialement
I choose to present you the PS3 because lot of teens use it, i'm going to describe it in my presentation. It went out in EUROPE on 23rd March 2007, it was invented by Company SONY, one of the biggest creator of new technologies. It succeeds the PS2, it is a concurrent of WII created by nintendo and XBOX360 by Microsoft. It is a games console 7th generation, because is not used only to play video games. In fact, we can use it to watch DVD, listen music, surf oon web, and communicate with people in all the world. It looks like a computer with her hard disk, DVD drive, and a image quality in HD. Merci à vous
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-03-2009 18:25
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Réponse: Correction /playstation 3 de linsey34, postée le 28-03-2009 à 19:02:58 (S | E)
Dear aymeu,
tu trouveras en rouge les erreurs à corriger !
I choose to present you the PS3 because lot of teens use it, i'm going to describe it in my presentation. It went out in EUROPE on 23rd March 2007, it was invented by Company SONY, one of the biggest creator of new technologies. It succeeds the PS2, it is a concurrent of WII created by nintendo and XBOX360 by Microsoft. It is a games console 7th generation, because is not used only to play video games. In fact, we can use it to watch DVD, listen music, surf oon web, and communicate with people in all the world. It looks like a computer with her hard disk, DVD drive, and a image quality in HD.
Réponse: Correction /playstation 3 de aymeu, postée le 28-03-2009 à 19:25:46 (S | E)
Merci c'est vraiment très sympa
Je vais essayer de le corriger mais c'est pas évident les bonnes réponses ne me sautent pas aux yeux.
