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Expression écrite Nandira
Message de alynia posté le 22-04-2009 à 16:31:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Pouvez vous me corriger mes fautes?
Mma Ramotswe has opened a private agency in Bostwana.Mr Patel has asked her to find out about his daughter nandira's boyfriend...
Mme Ramotswe asks Nandira to have information to nandira’s boyfriend.
She learns than Nandira has not a boyfriend.
Nandira does that just for the family because she wants them to think there’s somebody she choses, not somebody they thought right for she.
Mme Ramotswe will to test to persuade M Patel.
Merci
Message de alynia posté le 22-04-2009 à 16:31:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Pouvez vous me corriger mes fautes?
Mma Ramotswe has opened a private agency in Bostwana.Mr Patel has asked her to find out about his daughter nandira's boyfriend...
Mme Ramotswe asks Nandira to have information to nandira’s boyfriend.
She learns than Nandira has not a boyfriend.
Nandira does that just for the family because she wants them to think there’s somebody she choses, not somebody they thought right for she.
Mme Ramotswe will to test to persuade M Patel.
Merci
Réponse: Expression écrite Nandira de laure95, postée le 22-04-2009 à 18:45:44 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Mma Ramotswe has opened a private agency in Bostwana.Mr Patel
Mme Ramotswe asks Nandira to have information to (about) nandira’s (her) boyfriend.
She learns than Nandira has not a boyfriend.
Nandira does that just for the family because she wants them to think there’s somebody (mal dit) she choses (temps?), not somebody they thought right for she (pronom complément).
Mme Ramotswe will to test to persuade M Patel.
Réponse: Expression écrite Nandira de alynia, postée le 22-04-2009 à 20:01:58 (S | E)
Voila grâce a votre aide
Mma Ramotswe has opened a private agency in Bostwana.Mr Patel asked her to find out his daughter nandira's boyfriend...
Mme Ramotswe asks Nandira to have information about her boyfriend.
She learns than Nandira doesn't have boyfriend.
Nandira did that just for the family because she wants them to think that there is somebody which has chooses, not somebody they thought right for her.
Mme Ramotswe want try to persuade M Patel.
Merci beaucoup
Réponse: Expression écrite Nandira de twista, postée le 23-04-2009 à 17:54:21 (S | E)
Mme Ramotswe has opened a private agency in Bostwana. Mr Patel asked (ici j'aurais laissé le present perfect, car l'information a le même statut que celle d'avant : un passé qui a une conséquence dans le présent -> paragraphe suivant) her to find out his daughter Nandira's boyfriend...
Mme Ramotswe asks Nandira to have (pas utile) information about her boyfriend.
She learns than Nandira doesn't have (il manque "any") boyfriend.
Nandira did that (did what?) just for the family because she wants them to think that there is somebody which (sujet) has chooses (temps??), not somebody they thought right for her.
(Je crois savoir ce que tu veux dire. En français j'aurais dit :
Nandira a dit a sa famille qu'elle avait un petit ami (qu'elle en avait un) qu'elle avait choisi, pour qu'ils n'en choisissent pas un pour elle.
Maintenant, traduire (si c'est bien ça que tu veux dire).
pistes :
- en avoir un : to have one
- pour qu'ils : so that they...
- attention aux temps !)
Mme Ramotswe want try to persuade M Patel.
Bon courage.
Réponse: Expression écrite Nandira de choupa22, postée le 11-05-2009 à 13:28:57 (S | E)
moi aussi j'ai un probleme il faut que je fasse un résumer sur nandira
mais je ne c'est pas parler en anglais je suis trop nul
aidez moi svp
merci d'avance
