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Message de pierrepenne posté le 18-06-2009 à 22:03:24 (S | E | F)
Could you please gimme your advice concerning my text and correct my faults.
Thanks
The climate change is windfall for the home building industry.
Actually, as all the business, the builder take advantage of climate to create new houses in order to fulfill the need of a city or people.
That's why, news houses like floating homes can be imagined and developed.
For instance, excepted floating homes, the manufacturers contrived houses on stilts.
To make money and to please customers, They must design houses in a fancy way, water-resistant, and secure.
However, they must invest in construction and research engineers to make sure getting a nice, strong and attractive house.
Message de pierrepenne posté le 18-06-2009 à 22:03:24 (S | E | F)
Could you please gimme your advice concerning my text and correct my faults.
Thanks
The climate change is windfall for the home building industry.
Actually, as all the business, the builder take advantage of climate to create new houses in order to fulfill the need of a city or people.
That's why, news houses like floating homes can be imagined and developed.
For instance, excepted floating homes, the manufacturers contrived houses on stilts.
To make money and to please customers, They must design houses in a fancy way, water-resistant, and secure.
However, they must invest in construction and research engineers to make sure getting a nice, strong and attractive house.
Réponse: Builder de laure95, postée le 19-06-2009 à 14:24:29 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois reprendre:
The climate change is a windfall for the home building industry.
Actually, as all the business
, the builder take (3è personne du singulier du présent, donc...) advantage of the climate to create new houses in order to fulfill (answer ou meet pour répondre à 1 besoin) the need of a city or people.That's why, news (jamais de "s" à 1 adjectif) houses like floating homes (houses) can be imagined and developed.
For instance, except
To make money and
However, they must invest in construction and research engineers to make sure getting (pourquoi le gérondif?) a nice, strong and attractive house.
Réponse: Builder de pierrepenne, postée le 21-06-2009 à 18:56:03 (S | E)
ok donc si je me corrige :
The climate change is a windfall for the home building industry.
Actually, the builder take advantage of the climate to create new houses in order to answer the need of a city or people.
That's why, new houses like floating houses can be imagined and developed.
For instance, excepted floating homes, the manufacturers contrive houses on stilts.
To make money and to please customers, They must design houses in a fancy way, water-resistant, and secure.
However, they must invest in construction and research engineers to make sure to get a nice, strong and attractive house.
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Modifié par kolimang le 22-06-2009 14:29
Réponse: Builder de laure95, postée le 22-06-2009 à 09:54:08 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici les dernières choses à revoir:
The climate change is a windfall for the home building industry.
Actually, the builder take (toujours le même problème de conjugaison) advantage of the climate to create new houses in order to answer the need of a city or people.
That's why, new houses like floating houses can be imagined and developed.
For instance, excepted floating homes, the manufacturers contrive houses on stilts.
To make money and
However, they must invest in construction and research (search ou look for) engineers to make sure to get a nice, strong and attractive house.
