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Correction/Television, video games
Message de lympia posté le 21-09-2009 à 09:52:11 (S | E | F)
bonjour,
j'aimerais que quelqu'un corrige le commentaire que j'ai fait..je n'ai pas fait d'anglais depuis 1 an et demi et j'ai besoin de me remettre à niveau.
d'avance merci..
With the years, the video games take more place in the life of children. Technology develops quickly and ofter to the children a pastime more attractive than the reading.
Television, video games are in more and more home in England.
Without efforts, children are absorbed by the images and the sounds.
They are instantaneously in a other world. The attraction of the books moves back in spite of meascrements taken to encourage the children to read.
The rich families give more taste to read.
Voilà, il n'est pas fini mais j'aimerais avoir vos corrections...
merci de m'avoir lu..
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-09-2009 09:58
Message de lympia posté le 21-09-2009 à 09:52:11 (S | E | F)
bonjour,
j'aimerais que quelqu'un corrige le commentaire que j'ai fait..je n'ai pas fait d'anglais depuis 1 an et demi et j'ai besoin de me remettre à niveau.
d'avance merci..
With the years, the video games take more place in the life of children. Technology develops quickly and ofter to the children a pastime more attractive than the reading.
Television, video games are in more and more home in England.
Without efforts, children are absorbed by the images and the sounds.
They are instantaneously in a other world. The attraction of the books moves back in spite of meascrements taken to encourage the children to read.
The rich families give more taste to read.
Voilà, il n'est pas fini mais j'aimerais avoir vos corrections...
merci de m'avoir lu..
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-09-2009 09:58
Réponse: Correction/Television, video games de linsey34, postée le 21-09-2009 à 21:29:30 (S | E)
Lympia,
je surligne en rouge les erreurs à corriger:
With the years, the video games take more place in the life of children. Technology develops quickly and ofter to the children a pastime more attractive than the reading.
Television, video games are in more and more home in England.
Without efforts, children are absorbed by the images and the sounds.
They are instantaneously in a other world. The attraction of the books moves back in spite of meascrements taken to encourage the children to read.
The rich families give more taste to read.
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