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German film /! ( Correction )
Message de overshambles posté le 18-11-2009 à 16:27:59 (S | E | F)
J'ai une description à rendre rapidement !
Voici ce que j'ai décris : Lien Internet
This document is a poster which represents a German film which I like a lot. In the middle of the poster, we can see a man who turns his back to us. It’s the main actor. At the bottom of the poster we are showing the big title with above a drawing which represents the wave. Below the title, we can see the name of the director, Dennis Gansel. At the top of the poster, there are the names of the main actors. In the background of the actor from behind, we can see lots of pupils , all dressed in white and making the same gesture. Predominant colors are white, red and black. The film wants to denounce the dictatorship in Germany. Furthermore, the film wants make us think about the methods employed by this regime. It is a very convincing film with the suspense and the sadness. The actors are great and the very fascinating story. That’s why, it is a fabulous film!
Je remercie vraiment les personnes qui auront pris de leur temps pour m'aider !!
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Modifié par bridg le 18-11-2009 17:58
Message de overshambles posté le 18-11-2009 à 16:27:59 (S | E | F)
J'ai une description à rendre rapidement !
Voici ce que j'ai décris : Lien InternetThis document is a poster which represents a German film which I like a lot. In the middle of the poster, we can see a man who turns his back to us. It’s the main actor. At the bottom of the poster we are showing the big title with above a drawing which represents the wave. Below the title, we can see the name of the director, Dennis Gansel. At the top of the poster, there are the names of the main actors. In the background of the actor from behind, we can see lots of pupils , all dressed in white and making the same gesture. Predominant colors are white, red and black. The film wants to denounce the dictatorship in Germany. Furthermore, the film wants make us think about the methods employed by this regime. It is a very convincing film with the suspense and the sadness. The actors are great and the very fascinating story. That’s why, it is a fabulous film!
Je remercie vraiment les personnes qui auront pris de leur temps pour m'aider !!
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Modifié par bridg le 18-11-2009 17:58
Réponse: German film /! ( Correction ) de seb06000, postée le 18-11-2009 à 18:37:47 (S | E)
bonsoir,
je vous laisse les éventuelles indications de correction:
This document is a poster which represents a German film which I like a lot. In the middle of the poster, we can see a man who turns his back to us. It’s the main actor. At the bottom of the poster we are showing( tournure ne marche pas => nous montrons?) the big title with above a drawing which represents the wave. Below the title, we can see the name of the director, Dennis Gansel. At the top of the poster, there are the names of the main actors. In the background of the actor from behind, we can see lots of pupils , all dressed in white and making the same gesture. Predominant colors are white, red and black. The film wants to denounce the dictatorship in Germany. Furthermore, the film wants ( construction de 'want' à revoir) make us think about the methods employed by this regime. It is a very convincing film with the suspense and the sadness( pas d'article aux notions) . The actors are great and the very fascinating story (construction ). That’s why, it is a fabulous film!
Voilà, essayez si vous pouvez éviter de toujours utiliser ' I can see', c'est correct mais répétitif, vous pouvez le dire autrement!
Amicalement
sebastien
Réponse: German film /! ( Correction ) de overshambles, postée le 18-11-2009 à 19:55:57 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide !!! Qui m'a été très précieuse !!
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