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Correction/dialogue: l'habitat
Message de tounsiya74 posté le 24-05-2010 à 11:55:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.
J'ai écrit un dialogue entre deux personnes sur le lieu d'habitation.Je trouve qu'il n'est pas très développé.Doncsvp s'il vous plaît aidez-moi à l'améliorer.
Merci d'avance.
Linda: Hello Patrick, do you live in the house or a appartment?
Patrick: I live in a big house beside of the lake.
Linda: In the city or in the country?
Patrick: In the heart of the city.
Linda: How many storey are there?
Patrick: There are three storey.
Linda: Is there a garden?a swimming-pool?a garage?a study?a basement?
Patrick: I have a big beautiful garden, a large swimming-pool, a spacious garage, a luminous study, and a basement.
Linda: How many rooms are there?
Patrick: There are ten rooms.
Linda: Oh, you're lucky!
Patrick: Yes, I know!
Linda: How many bedrooms are there?
Patrick: There are five bedrooms.
Linda: How many bahtrooms are there?toilets?kitchen?
Patrick: There are two broad bathrooms, a toilet and a fitted kitchen.
Linda: Waow, what a big house!
Patrick: Yes, it's very comfortable!
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Modifié par bridg le 24-05-2010 12:07
+ titre.
Nous ne pouvons corriger que ce que nous voyons.Nous ne pouvons pas étoffer votre travail
Message de tounsiya74 posté le 24-05-2010 à 11:55:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.
J'ai écrit un dialogue entre deux personnes sur le lieu d'habitation.Je trouve qu'il n'est pas très développé.Donc
Merci d'avance.
Linda: Hello Patrick, do you live in the house or a appartment?
Patrick: I live in a big house beside of the lake.
Linda: In the city or in the country?
Patrick: In the heart of the city.
Linda: How many storey are there?
Patrick: There are three storey.
Linda: Is there a garden?a swimming-pool?a garage?a study?a basement?
Patrick: I have a big beautiful garden, a large swimming-pool, a spacious garage, a luminous study, and a basement.
Linda: How many rooms are there?
Patrick: There are ten rooms.
Linda: Oh, you're lucky!
Patrick: Yes, I know!
Linda: How many bedrooms are there?
Patrick: There are five bedrooms.
Linda: How many bahtrooms are there?toilets?kitchen?
Patrick: There are two broad bathrooms, a toilet and a fitted kitchen.
Linda: Waow, what a big house!
Patrick: Yes, it's very comfortable!
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Modifié par bridg le 24-05-2010 12:07
+ titre.
Nous ne pouvons corriger que ce que nous voyons.Nous ne pouvons pas étoffer votre travail
Réponse: Correction/dialogue: l'habitat de tounsiya74, postée le 24-05-2010 à 12:13:57 (S | E)
d'accord.Je vais essayer de me débrouiller toute seule.merci quand même
Réponse: Correction/dialogue: l'habitat de gerondif, postée le 24-05-2010 à 12:30:55 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Par contre, on peut vous signaler quelques erreurs ou oublis.
Linda: Hello Patrick, do you live in a
Patrick: I live in a big house beside of
Linda: In the city or in the country?
Patrick: In the heart of the city.
Linda: How many storeys are there?
Patrick: There are three storey.(pluriel)
Linda: Is there a garden?a swimming-pool?a garage?a study?a basement?
Patrick: I have a big beautiful garden, a large swimming-pool, a spacious garage, a luminous study, and a basement.
Linda: How many rooms are there?
Patrick: There are ten rooms.
Linda: Oh, you're lucky!
Patrick: Yes, I know!
Linda: How many bedrooms are there?
Patrick: There are five bedrooms.
Linda: How many bahtrooms are there?toilets?kitchen?
Patrick: There are two broad bathrooms, a toilet and a fitted kitchen.
Linda: Waow, what a big house!
Patrick: Yes, it's very comfortable!
Réponse: Correction/dialogue: l'habitat de notrepere, postée le 24-05-2010 à 17:59:21 (S | E)
Hello:For your trivial pursuits:
storey/storeys =
story/stories =
This building has twelve storeys.
This building has twelve stories.
Réponse: Correction/dialogue: l'habitat de gerondif, postée le 24-05-2010 à 18:13:41 (S | E)
Hello,
There are indeed different spellings and meanings !Il y a en effet différentes façons de parler des étages:
This building has twelve storeys (GB)/stories.(US) / twelves floors (GB)
This building has twelve stories. This does look strange for our continental eyes. Like Mark Twain,I would say it's a tall tale ! But a double click proves you right,notrepere !
Try to figure out this one,notrepère:
This building has twelve stories. "Stories ? tu nous la bailles belle !"
(que signifie cette expression et quel rapport avec stories? c'est un jeu de mot bilingue)
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