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Correction/ joie de vivre
Message de cyrielleg posté le 31-08-2011 à 13:40:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois écrire un texte en anglais sans faute, évidemment. Seulement j'ai bien peur d'en avoir fait quelques unes, voire beaucoup,que je ne peux pas me permettre.
Pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît?
Voici mon texte:
My best feature is maybe my lifesenjoying (???) (joie de vivre). I am hardly ever tired and I always smile. My friends know they can count on me. I laugh a lot and this laugh is a comforting in the worst situation. They can trust me they can rely on me.
My worst characteristic could be my attitude faced with work. I usually begin my work at the last minute. But sometimes I don't have enough time.. In addition I am a little bit perfectionist. And I suppose you are understanding that the two can not set together. I don't have selfconfidence and, I think I can do more and better...
Merci et désolée pour les fautes.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-08-2011 14:37
Message de cyrielleg posté le 31-08-2011 à 13:40:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois écrire un texte en anglais sans faute, évidemment. Seulement j'ai bien peur d'en avoir fait quelques unes, voire beaucoup,que je ne peux pas me permettre.
Pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît?
Voici mon texte:
My best feature is maybe my lifesenjoying (???) (joie de vivre). I am hardly ever tired and I always smile. My friends know they can count on me. I laugh a lot and this laugh is a comforting in the worst situation. They can trust me they can rely on me.
My worst characteristic could be my attitude faced with work. I usually begin my work at the last minute. But sometimes I don't have enough time.. In addition I am a little bit perfectionist. And I suppose you are understanding that the two can not set together. I don't have selfconfidence and, I think I can do more and better...
Merci et désolée pour les fautes.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-08-2011 14:37
Réponse: Correction/ joie de vivre de laure95, postée le 31-08-2011 à 19:15:09 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
My best feature is maybe my lifesenjoying (???) (joie de vivre). (joy of life or joie de vivre)I am hardly ever tired and I always smile. My friends know they can count on me. I laugh a lot and this laugh is a comforting in the worst situation (au pluriel). They can trust me they can rely on me.
My worst characteristic could be my attitude faced with work. I usually begin my work at the last minute. But sometimes I don't have enough time.. In addition I am a little bit perfectionist. And I suppose you are understanding (je mettrais le présent simple) that the two (both) can not (othographe) set together. I don't have selfconfidence and, I think I can (could) do more and better...
Everyone can do better!
Réponse: Correction/ joie de vivre de cyrielleg, postée le 01-09-2011 à 17:14:28 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup
Réponse: Correction/ joie de vivre de dvn44, postée le 02-09-2011 à 15:34:37 (S | E)
Boujour,
Je vous propose ces modifications sans altérer, je l'espère, le sens de votre texte :
Zest of life is probably my chief characteristic. I am hardly ever tired and I always smile. My friends know they can count on me. I laugh a lot and laughing is a comforting way to face hard times. They can trust me.They can rely on me.
The sole weakness could be my attitude at work. I usually begin my work at the last minute. But sometimes, I don't have enough time... In addition, I am a little bit perfectionist. And I presume you understand that both can't be put together. I'm not selfconfident and I think I could do more and better...
Cordialement
Réponse: Correction/ joie de vivre de cyrielleg, postée le 06-09-2011 à 17:48:15 (S | E)
Merci, vraiment
Je vais corriger mes erreurs en tenant compte de vos corrections !!
Et encore merci
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