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Correction/Past and present
Message de nadine38 posté le 16-11-2011 à 18:52:46 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody!

Please, help me,it would be great if you could correct my mistakes in this paragraph.
The question is:
Write a paragraph about your abilities / inabilities in the past / present.

My answer:

Many things has changed from the past to the present I could play with my friends hide and seek, but now that I'm mature I am unable ...
I could even do a lot of stupidity, I can understand English but not before ..
I could play with my doll, play with a lot of play but I can not do that at my age of today

Thank you!
Have a nice day!

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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-11-2011 20:09

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Réponse: Correction/Past and present de gerondif, postée le 16-11-2011 à 19:49:02 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

Many things has(pluriel) changed from the past to the present(maladroit) I could play hide and seek with my friends before, but now that I'm mature(ne convient pas, utilisez older ou "a grown up") I am unable to (un peu maladroit, il vaudrait mieux utiliser "I can't...." et la traduction de "ne plus" (any more) ...
I could even do a lot of stupidity,(pluriel en ies, mais on dirait plutôt silly things) I can understand English now but not before ..
I could play with my doll, play with a lot of play(chercher le nom commun jeux) but I can not(en un seul mot) do that at my age of today

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Réponse: Correction/Past and present de nadine38, postée le 16-11-2011 à 20:50:10 (S | E)
Hello!

Thank you very much! You have really helped me!

Good evening!

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