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Message de marypop posté le 24-11-2011 à 11:09:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai rédigé une sorte de commentaire sur un article que nous devions lire en cours et je voulais vous demander de m'indiquer mes fautes s'il vous plaît.
Merci d'avance!
Mary Pop
Some weeks age, I read an article about the situation of an italian archeological site: Pompei. This well known place faces increasing moisture problems.
The paintings and even the buldings are endangered. Houses, parts of walls are coming down. No more archeological exploration is made, since the protection of the site is the most important thing to care about. Indeed, the tourism is bigger and bigger with the years. A large part of the site is closed to the public, and false painting for exemple are presented on teh ste, the real one are restaured or putted in places, where the concervation conditions are filled.
The italian government feels concerned and assured he would give money to help for the protection and the restauration of Pompei.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-11-2011 18:35
Message de marypop posté le 24-11-2011 à 11:09:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai rédigé une sorte de commentaire sur un article que nous devions lire en cours et je voulais vous demander de m'indiquer mes fautes s'il vous plaît.
Merci d'avance!
Mary Pop
Some weeks age, I read an article about the situation of an italian archeological site: Pompei. This well known place faces increasing moisture problems.
The paintings and even the buldings are endangered. Houses, parts of walls are coming down. No more archeological exploration is made, since the protection of the site is the most important thing to care about. Indeed, the tourism is bigger and bigger with the years. A large part of the site is closed to the public, and false painting for exemple are presented on teh ste, the real one are restaured or putted in places, where the concervation conditions are filled.
The italian government feels concerned and assured he would give money to help for the protection and the restauration of Pompei.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-11-2011 18:35
Réponse: Commentaire/article de dolfine56, postée le 24-11-2011 à 15:08:53 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Some weeks age, I read an article about the situation of an italian archeological site: Pompei. This well known place faces increasing moisture problems.
The paintings and even the buldings are endangered. Houses, parts of walls are coming down. No more archeological exploration is made, since the protection of the site is the most important thing to care about. Indeed, the tourism is bigger and bigger with the years. A large part of the site is closed to the public, and false painting for exemple are presented on teh ste, the real one are restaured or putted in places, where the concervation conditions are filled.
The italian government feels concerned and assured he would give money to help for the protection and the restauration of Pompei.
I'd say "few weeks ago", but maybe your formulation is right?
please wait for more answers...
Réponse: Commentaire/article de marypop, postée le 24-11-2011 à 17:46:47 (S | E)
j'ai fait effectivement quelques fautes de frappe, désolée
Je voulais mettre some weeks ago, mais peut être il faut employer few, je ne sais pas trop la nuance que cela intègre.Pour "italian" quel est le problème?
Merci pour ces corrections, je reposte le texte corrigé, sans les fautes de frappe:
Some weeks ago, I read an article about the situation of an italian archeological site: Pompei. This well known place faces increasing moisture problems.
The paintings and even the buldings are endangered. Houses, parts of walls are coming down. No more archeological exploration is made, since the protection of the site is the most important thing to care about. Indeed, the tourism is bigger and bigger with the years. A large part of the site is closed to the public, and false painting for exemple are presented on the site, the real one are restaured or putt in places, where the conservation conditions are filled.
The italian government feels concerned and assured he would give money to help for the protection and the restauration of Pompei.
Réponse: Commentaire/article de gerondif, postée le 24-11-2011 à 18:03:40 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
(A few sonne mieux)Some weeks ago, I read an article about the situation of an italian archeological site: Pompei. This well-known place faces increasing moisture problems.
The paintings and even the buildings are endangered. Houses, parts of walls are coming down. No more archeological exploration is made, since the protection of the site is the most important thing to care about. Indeed,
The italian government feels concerned and assured(promised/ asssured us) he would give money to help for the protection and the restauration of Pompei.
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