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Message de floflo27 posté le 17-08-2012 à 19:23:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
j'ai reçu un travail de vacances en anglais, pouvez-vousvous m'aider s'il vous plaît?
Je dois notamment écrire plusieurs petits textes sur des documents donnés sur des sujets divers.
Voici deux petits textes sur le fait de raccourcir les grandes vacances, le premier est sur des avis des documents que j'ai reçus et le deuxième est mon avis.
1.
There are the pros about shorter summer holiday like the teenagers don't have time for get bored, but do they have enough time for forget school, to relax and to destress?
And when we are on the beach, we do sport like swimming of beach volleyball. therefore our fitness is better.
2.
I think that shorter summer holiday it's not nice because we don't have time for to relax and rest.
If the summer holiday becomes shorter, we can't go to foreign.
During the holiday, we can always do something like see her friends, go to foreign, go to cinema, to rest, go shopping, do it's holidaywork...
I never get bored during the holiday!
Un tout grand merci d'avance!
Flo
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-08-2012 19:25
Message de floflo27 posté le 17-08-2012 à 19:23:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
j'ai reçu un travail de vacances en anglais, pouvez-vousvous m'aider s'il vous plaît?
Je dois notamment écrire plusieurs petits textes sur des documents donnés sur des sujets divers.
Voici deux petits textes sur le fait de raccourcir les grandes vacances, le premier est sur des avis des documents que j'ai reçus et le deuxième est mon avis.
1.
There are the pros about shorter summer holiday like the teenagers don't have time for get bored, but do they have enough time for forget school, to relax and to destress?
And when we are on the beach, we do sport like swimming of beach volleyball. therefore our fitness is better.
2.
I think that shorter summer holiday it's not nice because we don't have time for to relax and rest.
If the summer holiday becomes shorter, we can't go to foreign.
During the holiday, we can always do something like see her friends, go to foreign, go to cinema, to rest, go shopping, do it's holidaywork...
I never get bored during the holiday!
Un tout grand merci d'avance!
Flo
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-08-2012 19:25
Réponse: Travail / vacances de notrepere, postée le 17-08-2012 à 19:36:42 (S | E)
Bonjour1.
There are the pros about a shorter summer holiday like the teenagers don't have time for
(mauvaise préposition) get bored, but do(mauvaise auxiliaire; 'will') they have enough time for(mauvaise préposition) forget school, to relax and to destress?And when we are on the beach, we do sport like swimming of beach volleyball. therefore our fitness is better.
2.
I think that a shorter summer holiday it's
('it' est inutile) not nice(pas le meilleur adjectif) because we don't have time for to relax and rest.If the summer holiday becomes shorter, we can't go to foreign
.During the holiday, we can always do something like see her
friends, go to foreign, go to the cinema, to rest, go shopping, do it's holidaywork...I never get bored during the holiday!
Réponse: Travail / vacances de floflo27, postée le 17-08-2012 à 20:24:35 (S | E)
Merci!
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