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Message de pootpoot posté le 03-12-2012 à 18:27:52 (S | E | F)
Hello,
tomorrow I'll have to talk about appartheid. Please correct my text. :
Appartheid is a name of these politics racial segregation. Appartheid was establhished in 1948. It's politics for white and for expulsion (represion) of non-white. With this a system segragation the white skin people make a new laws.
The white people forbid as a non white people reach city and mixed marriages. Population of south Africa are toss out (put outside, left out, segregated). In 1960s they was excluded from the olympic games. Moreover they don't have right to vote. The white gouvernment compel black people have live in a shantytown (touwnship). Their them force yourself to use a passbook for fit in town for going work.
To mean mind, th passbook it's not a very good solution for the equality. All newspaper talk about the tragedy of the appartheid.
Likewise they are tortured or emprisonned if they go in white domain.
There is resistance movement, it sould be noted that, most often, it's a violent resistance. For exemple, during key events of Soweto, 600 people where killed. Other , there were emprisoned.
Indeed, for a whites people, the black's considered like a animal, like a slave !
Do you think these normal ?
That's shackle for these people. Consequently, their live in poverty. The inequality and misery are breach (violation) of the human right ! These people live precariousness so in insecurity. That's why the law of the human right must are written.
Thank you !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-12-2012 21:12
Message de pootpoot posté le 03-12-2012 à 18:27:52 (S | E | F)
Hello,
tomorrow I'll have to talk about appartheid. Please correct my text. :
Appartheid is a name of these politics racial segregation. Appartheid was establhished in 1948. It's politics for white and for expulsion (represion) of non-white. With this a system segragation the white skin people make a new laws.
The white people forbid as a non white people reach city and mixed marriages. Population of south Africa are toss out (put outside, left out, segregated). In 1960s they was excluded from the olympic games. Moreover they don't have right to vote. The white gouvernment compel black people have live in a shantytown (touwnship). Their them force yourself to use a passbook for fit in town for going work.
To mean mind, th passbook it's not a very good solution for the equality. All newspaper talk about the tragedy of the appartheid.
Likewise they are tortured or emprisonned if they go in white domain.
There is resistance movement, it sould be noted that, most often, it's a violent resistance. For exemple, during key events of Soweto, 600 people where killed. Other , there were emprisoned.
Indeed, for a whites people, the black's considered like a animal, like a slave !
Do you think these normal ?
That's shackle for these people. Consequently, their live in poverty. The inequality and misery are breach (violation) of the human right ! These people live precariousness so in insecurity. That's why the law of the human right must are written.
Thank you !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-12-2012 21:12
Réponse: Correction/ homework de notrepere, postée le 03-12-2012 à 18:46:16 (S | E)
HelloSi vous postez votre travail à la dernière minute, personne ne peut vous aider. Votre travail comporte trop d'erreurs et la plupart de vos phrases n'ont aucun sens. Désolé de ne pas vous avoir aidé.
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