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Biographie /Alfred Hitchcock
Message de nonotte posté le 18-02-2013 à 18:16:45
Bonjour,
j'ai une biographie de Hitchcock à faire en anglais. J'en suis ici, pourriez-vous me corriger si vous trouvez des fautes ?
Merci pour votre aide.
Alfred Joseph Hitchcock was born one August 13.1899 in Leytonstone in the suburbs of London and died on April 29th, 1980 in Los Angeles. It is a scenario writer At the time, Alfred Hitchcock follows studies of engineer, after whom it integrates the company of the Hanley telegraphs. In parallel, he takes courses with Beautiful arts at the University of London. But very attracted by the cinema, it then joined in 1920 after a short training course of assistant technician the Paramount studio in London for which it conceives subtitlings of silent films. Two years later, it makes the meeting of his future wife, Alma Reville, and is engaged as an assistant director. It makes a first attempt at realization with Number 13, which remained forever unfinished. But well far from discouraging itself, Alfred Hitchcock perseveres and signs in 1925 his first work, the Garden of the pleasure. Its career is launched. He will meet with success in England and well beyond the British borders thanks to works such as the man who knew some too much (1934), the 39 Steps (1935) or a woman disappears (1938). After a career with success in his native land at the time ducinéma muetet at the sound ducinéma beginning, Hitchcock leaves to settle àHollywoodcar in front of his success, Hollywoodlui submits some proposals. Alfred Hitchcock, who is consequently made call “Hitch”, joined the United States by signing the dramatic thriller Rebecca (1940), crowned public triumph of the Oscar of the best film. The rewards however did not really push the career of the scenario writer: named six times at the Oscar of the Best director, Hitchcock never gained only one of them. But the spectators do not follow criticisms, sometimes hard towards the scenario writer, and acclaim the thriller the Unknown of North-Fast (1951) or choking it door-close the Crime was almost perfect (1954).
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-02-2013 18:42
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-02-2013 21:45
Bonjour,
Votre texte provient de toute évidence d'un traducteur en ligne, ce que nous ne corrigeons pas car votre travail n'a aucun sens.
Vous pouvez consulter un dictionnaire (pas un traducteur) en faisant un double clic sur un mot.
Merci de nous proposer un travail personnel qui sera alors sans doute vérifié.
Best wishes.
Message de nonotte posté le 18-02-2013 à 18:16:45
Bonjour,
j'ai une biographie de Hitchcock à faire en anglais. J'en suis ici, pourriez-vous me corriger si vous trouvez des fautes ?
Merci pour votre aide.
Alfred Joseph Hitchcock was born one August 13.1899 in Leytonstone in the suburbs of London and died on April 29th, 1980 in Los Angeles. It is a scenario writer At the time, Alfred Hitchcock follows studies of engineer, after whom it integrates the company of the Hanley telegraphs. In parallel, he takes courses with Beautiful arts at the University of London. But very attracted by the cinema, it then joined in 1920 after a short training course of assistant technician the Paramount studio in London for which it conceives subtitlings of silent films. Two years later, it makes the meeting of his future wife, Alma Reville, and is engaged as an assistant director. It makes a first attempt at realization with Number 13, which remained forever unfinished. But well far from discouraging itself, Alfred Hitchcock perseveres and signs in 1925 his first work, the Garden of the pleasure. Its career is launched. He will meet with success in England and well beyond the British borders thanks to works such as the man who knew some too much (1934), the 39 Steps (1935) or a woman disappears (1938). After a career with success in his native land at the time ducinéma muetet at the sound ducinéma beginning, Hitchcock leaves to settle àHollywoodcar in front of his success, Hollywoodlui submits some proposals. Alfred Hitchcock, who is consequently made call “Hitch”, joined the United States by signing the dramatic thriller Rebecca (1940), crowned public triumph of the Oscar of the best film. The rewards however did not really push the career of the scenario writer: named six times at the Oscar of the Best director, Hitchcock never gained only one of them. But the spectators do not follow criticisms, sometimes hard towards the scenario writer, and acclaim the thriller the Unknown of North-Fast (1951) or choking it door-close the Crime was almost perfect (1954).
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-02-2013 18:42
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-02-2013 21:45
Bonjour,
Votre texte provient de toute évidence d'un traducteur en ligne, ce que nous ne corrigeons pas car votre travail n'a aucun sens.
Vous pouvez consulter un dictionnaire (pas un traducteur) en faisant un double clic sur un mot.
Merci de nous proposer un travail personnel qui sera alors sans doute vérifié.
Best wishes.
Réponse: Biographie /Alfred Hitchcock de notrepere, postée le 18-02-2013 à 19:39:28
BonjourQuel traducteur automatique avez-vous utilisé?
Voici le problème : it, it, it, it, it, it
Qui est ce 'it'?
De plus, le traducteur n'a pas bien compris ce mot : àHollywoodcar
Les accents n'existent pas en anglais. (Although I wish they did. They're so much fun to type!)You are as bad with your 'its' as I am choosing between the imparfait and the passé composé in French.
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Modifié par notrepere le 18-02-2013 19:49
Oh, I hadn't even seen Hollywoodlui.
C'est un traducteur automatique dangereux !!-------------------
Modifié par notrepere le 18-02-2013 19:52
Oh, it gets better: "the man who knew some too much", "at the time ducinéma muetet at the sound ducinéma beginning", "or choking it door-close the"
Réponse: Biographie /Alfred Hitchcock de lucile83, postée le 18-02-2013 à 19:45:01
Hello,
to settle àHollywoodcar in front of his success, Hollywoodlui submits some proposals.
that one is funny too...
